Sample 3 - J-O-B Escape
FROM: Mark McClure - Email Copywriter
PRODUCT:Work: Job Escape E-book & Upsell
THEME: Your Job's A Max Security Prison (is a lot like...)
SUBJECT: Escape From Cubicle Prison
Hello %FirstName, Mark McClure here from
Kurt Russell played Snake Blissken, an ex-Special Forces anti-hero parachuted into Manhattan.
His Job?
To rescue the US president - taken hostage by a gang of crazies in downtown Manhattan.
Unfortunately, Manhattan's a giant prison camp for the very worst criminals.
Fenced off and patrolled by armed guards, these felons were dumped on the island to fend for themselves.
So how did the authorities get Snake to risk life and limb and go get the President out?
Simple.
They injected him with tiny explosives that'd blow open the cartoid arteries in his neck in exactly 24 hours.
And the charges could only be disabled in the final 15 minutes - in case he thought of skipping town early!
"Go get him, Snake. Turn up or die. We hold the keys to your life."
And that gubermint bureaucrat's life and death hold over Snake got me thinking how often clients come to me trapped in a job they hate.
Forced by the system to carry on just like Snake was.
Difference is - I've got an antidote you can get your hands on right now...
...but it's only available for the next 24 hours.
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This job change coaching ebook can be your ticket to a new and fulfilling life - free from tyrant bosses and toxic workplaces.
Inside you'll discover a simple 5 step plan that's helped hundreds of people break out of the prison many call just- over-broke.
How does that grab you?
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But, as inspiring as this material is, we don't just leave you with an e-book to read through on your own.
You'll also get unlimited access to our members-only "escape club" forum where you can read about other members' success stories, ask questions (we answer them right on the forum!) and get special deals (many of them free!) on the tools you'll need to build your very own money making websites.
It's basically a complete blueprint to securing you and your family's financial future.
So, are you ready to roll?
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And just to make sure you stay on track, we'll also invite you to our weekly, live 'power hour' teleseminars - where you can ask us anything you like about putting the plan into action in your life.
(You also get the mp3 file for each call to download.)
Members regularly tell us that the support and accountability they get on these calls is life changing.
What could you do with some of that very same support?
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Well, time's almost up!
If you're ready to take action in the next 24 hours - we're standing by ready to help you over the wall marked "freedom".
Mark
P.S. Here's one guarantee Snake never had. Get the job escape ebook, try it out and if you're unhappy for any reason within the first 60 days, just ask for a 100% refund. No questions asked.
You can only go right with a deal like this.
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Next Step
OK! That's the end of this sample email.
Notice that it's text only, about 511 words and is NOT a sales letter.
Remember! The goal of this particular ten-part email autoresponder series is to get the prospect to click ANY of the links that go to the direct response style sales letter for the ebook.
I'll be straight with you - I'm not a miracle worker.
My email autoresponder copy works best for clients who already have an in-demand product, a growing list and regular traffic.
If you meet those requirements then I'd be interested in
working with you.
Contact Mark Today
